Sunday, October 21


My good friend, Jeffrey (with two Fs,) gave me a perky writer's challenge late last night whilst yarning in an empty Shibuya park.

"In two sentences," he said, "describe how Tokyo looks from above."

And so, on I cracked and came up with this little ditty. I'm not sure if it is perfect yet, however, and I shall probably return to it later and tweak it some.

Here goes...
Sprawling, yes, sprawling is the grey ouroboros of sedulity. On and on it goes, winding, and the aptness of the word climaxes when I see the dream could never truly be captured on a single canvas; not even the canvas of verse.

Reckon you can do better?

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